I found it easy to think of the 'looks like' because we have just done a study on the place, so I had a pretty good idea in my head of what it looks like.
I found it hard to think of ideas especially for tastes and smells like.
I really enjoyed writing a poem, because we do not write poems that often and I love poems.
Next time I need to be more descriptive.
My Blog Post shows I am a Smart Learner.
Now here is my poem,
Looks like bees to a flowery meadow, as tourist from all around the world come to admire animals from the safari.
Smells like the lions fleshy meat torn apart by their sharp canines.
Tastes like the strong freshly brewed coffee at the exploring cafe.
Sounds like the mighty roar of the lion and the sweet elegant chirp of the birds.
Feels like the soft fur from the bouncing kangaroos.
Lives in Wellington Zoo.
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